oldskoooool!!!!

[Claxton_HTID]

at the minute at the stage where im jst tryin new things.. decided to try my hand at a bit of old skool.... created this melody..... wot ya think, wot dus it miss, where can it improve??? cheerz in advance :541:

http://www.4shared.com/file/18406659/1063e115/oldskool.html