My Latest UK Hardcore Track

[djsion]

Alright guys, im back again.

Sion & Mosser - What Is It

My latest hardcore track is on:7499:

http://www.4shared.com/file/21131948/e48e3615/Sion__Mosser_-_What_Is_It.html

Feedback would be good
Thanks

[Claxton_HTID]

lyk the lead and the melody good melody......

song structure needs work.... maybe a full breakown with silence jst 2 slow it down and build up.......

i lyk the bass used but the bass line needs to change with the melody...

u have the notes under the melody changin the bassline shud mirror them.....

hav more bit with jst beats and bass instead of havin sum sort of melody in all the tym try and hav a break in between chorus's....

overall gr8 lead and gr8 melody but ive made a few suggestions... u may disagreee........:541:

[DagaBabii]

I think it's good =]
I like the bass and the melody could use some more beats in tho.

[fenby87]

Ya have got the bass sounding class imo! Lead is shit hot anall, Needs Beefing up, But the general Sound/Idea is good...
Melody is orite, but its to much like the lead, sounds as if you have notched it up an octave or sumthing,, Ya need to figure your bass, find the notes/keys to creat the flow in the tune, percussion an all is missing Big time... I'm nt to keen on the FX/Delay on the crash. .

If this is work in progress, keep at it... If it's Complete, Do wat we suggest, add ya perc's, Get ya levels sorted and ya gt ya self a crackin tune fella...


I Really like it mate... Did you write it ya self.

[djsion]

Cheers Mate and yeah i did.

Il keep working on it for defo mate :541:

Thanks for the feedback people