Strongside

[Ironman]

Ain't shot nout on here in ages, so thought I would have a go, been writing a lot of stuff for a mixtape lately seeing if I can get enough stuff together to record something. Let me know what you think, sort of a grime style.



they said to me it couldnt be done, i replied shouldnt be done
it would be done my will be done, shot through the barriers like a gun,
murdered my nerves like sylar murdered his mother,
slayed my inabilaty to rhyme and held my breath like i was going under.
and over, respawned and it dawned on me,
the miraculous conception to a new mc, me.
they say out with the old in with the new,
i say too true, and too few, make the transition too "Its YOU" from WHO?
so now ive dropped my old ways, dont even call me by my old names
with a new style, new rhymes its a new name too advance my acclaim
Strongside is the tag of this domain, breaking out the north east for fame
picking up a brand new reign, like a cub to a lion ive grew my mane
picking lines and rhymes from a mind some would say was insane,
i would agree and say its self proclaimed,

[Francey]

when u gunna get sum audio sorted mate ? im dien 2 hear u sayin ya rhymes over a hiphop beat, top notch rhyme, but i dont no how ud say it so i cannit say the flows good cos i cud be sayin it totally different 2 u haha

[TINO]

good rhyme that m8, but like francey said i cant really judge the flow
id like to listen to you on this sort of stuff coz everything uv put up has been spot on
keep it up m8

[Makaveli]

a thought ya went off this music, and joined a band ?
either way quality as always paul, DEFFOS need to record summit

[Ironman]

Originally Posted by Makaveli

a thought ya went off this music, and joined a band ?
either way quality as always paul, DEFFOS need to record summit

Nah I started writing songs for a mate in a band but got bored of that quickly haha.

[Ironman]

Cheers for the feedback people its all appreciated and I understand what yous are saying, I will try get audio but I can't promise, it costs money if I want to get it done properly and money is something I don't have.

[EDDIE C]

class rhyme, something a bit defferent to what you normally see..
like the others said i wouldnt mind hearing audio coz i cant get the flow haha